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Daisy
01-22-2008, 03:58 PM
My DD8yo had a poetry assignment for R&S English today. We've been studying amphibians so she choose to incorporate that theme into the poem. I love it and just had to share with all of you.

Frogs
by Lydia

Spring has come.
The Frogs awake;
Peeping, Hopping, Croaking,
New watery eggs, they make.

Spring has gone.
The Tadpoles awake;
Swimming, Splashing, Growing,
New land-loving frogs, they'll make.

sdWTMer
01-22-2008, 04:01 PM
:)

chickenpatty
01-22-2008, 04:07 PM
Great Job! I will show it to my 8 yr old dd.

Tonia
01-22-2008, 04:26 PM
Aww. That is so sweet!

Daisy
01-22-2008, 04:58 PM
Thanks! She enjoyed the pat on the back especially since it didn't come from "Mom, the teacher." :p

LoriM
01-22-2008, 05:00 PM
Nicely done!

Andie
01-22-2008, 05:12 PM
I love it! Excellent job.

A+ from Not-Her-Mom (but I *am* another Lydia's mom!) :)

Meliss
01-22-2008, 05:14 PM
I like it!

Sparkle
01-22-2008, 08:57 PM
My DD8yo had a poetry assignment for R&S English today. We've been studying amphibians so she choose to incorporate that theme into the poem. I love it and just had to share with all of you.

Frogs
by Lydia

Spring has come.
The Frogs awake;
Peeping, Hopping, Croaking,
New watery eggs, they make.

Spring has gone.
The Tadpoles awake;
Swimming, Splashing, Growing,
New land-loving frogs, they'll make.

Very nice job! I like it.

Serendipity
01-22-2008, 11:17 PM
Wow! I'm impressed. She's a creative writer. :)

Annie G
01-23-2008, 10:38 AM
Well Done!!!

Adrianne
01-23-2008, 10:40 AM
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